From: daniel watson <ozzloy@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 10 Jun 2010 03:11:30 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: clean up vocational experience
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clean up vocational experience
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diff --git a/daniel_watson_resume.tex b/daniel_watson_resume.tex
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--- a/daniel_watson_resume.tex
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@@ -83,26 +83,27 @@
 	the supervision of Serge Belongie, Ph.D. UCSD.  My first project was a
 	firmware loader for an embedded camera hardware using mspgcc and C.
 }
-\cventry{2007}{Tutor}{UCSD}{San Diego}{}{
-	Tutored students in CSE 130, Programming Languages in the fall and winter
-		quarters.  We covered different styles of programming through different
-		languages: functional programming with OCaml; object oriented programming
-		with python; logic programming with prolog. 
+\cventry{2007}{Programming Languages Tutor}{UCSD}{San Diego}{}
+{
+	In CSE 130, I tutored students Programming Languages in the fall and winter
+	quarters.  We covered different styles of programming through different
+	languages: functional programming with OCaml; object oriented programming
+	with python; logic programming with prolog. 
 }
 \subsection{For Inspiration and Recognition of Science and Technology}
 % arguments 3 to 6 are optional
 \cventry{2003--2007}{Programming Subteam Mentor}{Midnight Mechanics Team 812}
-{San Diego}{}{
-	As a mentor, I helped high school students code controller firmware.  I
-	introduced them to many aspects of software development including version
-	control and collaboration with svn, and flow control such as \texttt{if} and
-	\texttt{for} constructs.
+{San Diego}{}
+{
+	I helped high school students code controller firmware and introduced them to
+	aspects of software development like version control with svn, and logic flow
+	control structures with C.
 }
 \cventry{2002--2003}{Programming Subteam Member}{Cheesy Poofs Team 254}
-{San Diego}{}{
-	Coded robot controller firmware in pBasic\newline{}
-	implemented autonomous mode, refactoring code to fit the executable into
-	EEPROM
+{San Jose}{}
+{
+	Coded robot controller firmware and autonomous mode in pBasic, shrinking code
+	into the EEPROM.
 }
 %\subsection{Miscellaneous}
 %% arguments 3 to 6 are optional