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@@ -74,14 +74,14 @@ It uses websockets to synchronize the game across all logged in
 players.  In order to get this running, I had to learn a lot about the
 stack tech that goes into any web page.  From http request to A-record
 (and AAAA-record), from Apache reverse proxy to the dynamic duo of
-Ring and Compojure, I have written and configured the tech behind the
-bingo page.  Reagent has provided a clean, functional way of updating
-the UI, and I am looking into Reframe to handle state update
-management.
+Ring and Compojure, I have written and configured the a large part of
+the tech stack behind my bingo page.  Reagent has provided a clean,
+functional way of updating the UI, and I am looking into Reframe to
+handle state update management.
 
 Those are just some of the technologies I learned specifically for
-this page.  In addition, I run GNU and Linux on my laptop and have
-been maintaining a personal virtual server for over a decade.
+this bingo page.  In addition, I run GNU and Linux on my laptop and
+have been maintaining a personal virtual server for over a decade.
 
 Clojure makes programming for the web fun again, and Clojurescript
 means I can create meaningful connections for people like my grampa,